Thursday, August 15, 2019

My speech


I dislike my speech but I think it would have been good if I wasn't the person saying it because my voice didn't sound good. I chose this topic because I wanted to reach out to people about stopping ocean pollution. I don't think I did very well. I had many pauses and sounded like a sick dying little girl. I think I would improve most things apart from my writing. I would just improve my voice and the way that I present it.
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  1. AnonymousAugust 15, 2019 at 9:57 AM

    Hi Amelia
    I don't think your voice was bad while you were saying your speech.
    I liked how you had rhetorical questions in your speech and how you changed you facial expression and used lots of hand gestures.
    Shot Amelia!

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    1. AnonymousAugust 15, 2019 at 10:03 AM

      Thanks Selina! What a coincidence! I commented on your speech too. No need for me to say if you wanted to check out my speech!! Your sincerely, Amelia.😊😁😜

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  2. AnonymousAugust 23, 2019 at 8:08 PM

    Kia Ora Amelia,
    thank you for being so caring for the ocean and the creatures in it. I liked your use of rhetorical questions, at my school I am learning about using rhetorical questions in my speech. Thank you for posting that on your blog. You didn't sound bad, (I probably might do worse.) thank you for caring.
    Ma te wa
    Timiah
    P.S Thank you for commenting on my blog.

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